To provide feedback on my first attempt at writing a scene with a dragon!
I do not wish to post it here, except with a password. So, if anyone is interested in reading what I’ve got and giving me some honest feedback, please let me know! Personally, I like the scene, but I have not read a whole lot of books that feature dragons and I just want to make sure I get it right.
The scene is not particularly long, so if you’re worried about the time, don’t. It should only take a few minutes to get through the scene where the dragon is introduced, unless you’d care to read the whole chapter, which is also an option.